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  Keith Barker February 2, 2013 at 8:59pm

  Hi Karl,

  If that's going to be printed A6 then the type in the testimonial box will be very small, and (excuse me while I go into boring graphic designer technical mode) printing white out of a 4-colour background that small could mean your text will be very fuzzy.

  Other than that, the back is a bit wordy, but on the whole, pretty good.
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  Andrew Evans February 2, 2013 at 9:09pm

  Looks good! Stands out and very clear what you are selling!
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  Liam Timmins February 2, 2013 at 9:34pm

  would recommend A5, not A6 due to the reasons mentioned by Keith
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  Benedict Simmons February 2, 2013 at 9:42pm

  Looks good, Do you get much business this way?
  Ben
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  Colin Hunt February 3, 2013 at 9:58am

  I would do away with the testimonial - they always look contrived to me – and it clutters the page.
  Maybe “then don’t hesitate to etc” should become “then please contact us on”
  I’m not sure you need the ‘about us text’, maybe it needs shortening and simplifying eg “reliable but yet affordable” should be simply “reliable yet affordable”
  Hope that doesn’t sound too picky, but I do like the set-up and colours.
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  Geoffrey King February 3, 2013 at 11:08am

  But why should they contact you?

  If you have a website detailing your services, why list them on the flyer?

  If you are using an A5 flyer I think the less is more principle should be applied.
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  Fenlandphil February 3, 2013 at 1:14pm

  I think A5 would be a better size.
  I would consider a sharper photo.
  I would also consider altering the headline to something like "Looking for reliable garden services?"
  Contact Grassworx then put your contact phone number.
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  neil aldridge February 3, 2013 at 10:10pm

  everything written in the testimonial are aspects of service i think that each and every client is going to expect from you whether you say it or not!
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  Robbie February 3, 2013 at 11:18pm

  I think you are going to need a higher quality photo image.