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  Brian www.mibservices.co.uk December 29, 2011 at 9:23pm

  Hard landscaping, cant see anything relating to maintenance Phil
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  phil smith yewtreelandscapes.com December 29, 2011 at 9:43pm

  thanks for replies so far, rowly you are spot on with the impression i wanted to give out, i know a few bits of the text needs sorting out. thanks
  
  Rowly Hill said:

  Overall the impression is that you are on the hard side.

  But you also do tree work, garden clearance, hedge cutting and mowing. These are to my mind minor operations you carry out in comparison to hard landscaping. I hope that's the image you wanted to portray!

  These aren't meant to be criticisms but observations Phil  -

  I found that some of the text on a couple of pages was cropped off to the LHS and I couldn't read it (certainly the "About us" page for one)

  On the "About Us" page there's something odd going on with the start of the third paragraph ( I think it should say "It's my belief")

  Rowly

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  It’s my belief that your garden should give you pleasure & a place to relax after a hard days work.

  t’s my belief that your garden should give you pleasure & a place to relax after a hard days work.
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  Chris Auld December 30, 2011 at 9:37am

  Definatley hard landscaping/garden design.
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  Simon Smith December 30, 2011 at 9:55am

  Yep i agree with all of those above, mainly hard landscaping with general garden services also covered.

  I find that it is largely defined by a feature image on your homepage, if its a paving project people within seconds register that you are a hard landscaper.

  you definately want to sort out the fixed width issue as i'm getting little scroll bars on every page and your sidebar is obscuring some of the body text.

  Overall it looks pretty good! well done.
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  GORDON December 30, 2011 at 5:37pm

  I am no expert but I would say it should be "it is our belief" as the rest of the text has been written in the third party.
  
  Rowly Hill said:

  Overall the impression is that you are on the hard side.

  But you also do tree work, garden clearance, hedge cutting and mowing. These are to my mind minor operations you carry out in comparison to hard landscaping. I hope that's the image you wanted to portray!

  These aren't meant to be criticisms but observations Phil  -

  I found that some of the text on a couple of pages was cropped off to the LHS and I couldn't read it (certainly the "About us" page for one)

  On the "About Us" page there's something odd going on with the start of the third paragraph ( I think it should say "It's my belief")

  Rowly

  I

  It’s my belief that your garden should give you pleasure & a place to relax after a hard days work.

  t’s my belief that your garden should give you pleasure & a place to relax after a hard days work.